Essay #3

Today during class we continued to work on our essay. We all got together and worked on the conclusion section. We got to finish half of the conclusion section and we are stuck trying to figure out how we should end the conclusion. We also decided to add another paragraph about weapons and armor because this section would be very long. We also checked each others paragraph and we all added some extra small details and fixed some sentences. We finished all our own paragraphs and tomorrow we all decided to work on the rest of the armor and weapons paragraph. The conclusion is finished but we are not so sure if its good enough.